Thứ Sáu, 26 tháng 11, 2010

COMPARISON AND CONTRACT ESSAY: BUSES AND MOTORBYKES

Nowadays we have a lot of kinds of transportations such as  planes,cars,trucks,trains,boats,buses ,motorbykes, etc ;however,two main kinds transportations we usually use everyday are buses and motorbykes.They are rather necessary and important for us to travel. They are very different but also similar in some aspects.
Buses and motorbykes are the main transportations we use to travel everyday .Vietnamese use  motorbykes widely because they have alot of kinds and not too expensive to buy. Almost the families have at least one or every members has one. Like motorbykes, buses are aslo use every day.Like a lots others students i always catch buses to shool because they are realy cheap and easy to go. Besides that,both of them can run thanks to petrol but this is one of  main reasons make environmental pollution.
Despite their similarities,these transportation are different.Buses are less comfortable than motorbykes .Travelling by buses we have to suffer a lots of problem.For example,.a lot of people catch bus  so it is difficult to go up and go down especially with erderly, women and children. Everyone hustle in the midst of a press and sweat falling down which is really risky and waste of time.Another problem is we easy have pocket-picked on the bus. This is the where stealer can easy to take money, cellphones or value others because there have a lots people sit or stand rather close together.As soon as  the stealer took them, they go down and hardly to be find them. Besides that, with motorbike we can easy drive to blind alley  that buses only go on highway.In spite of that,travelling by buses is safer than motorbykes. According to reserching, Viet nam has the highest accident ratio caused by driving motorbykes in the world.A lot of the mortorbykes drivers run at high speed and hardly avoid having accident while the buses drivers are rather carefull. They keep the speed because they know that they are responsible for preserving life of alot of passengers.Moreover, travelling by buses make less polutted than motorbykes. If one person drives have one motorbyke instead of going together on the one bus ,which makes more pollution. Nowadays, environmental pollution is getting more serious so people are advised catch buses to decrease polluted gas. Buses are aslo cheaper than motorbykes which is convenient for people who are not enough money to buy a motorbyke or catch a taxi.
Inshort, both motorbykes and buses have similarities and differences about their advantages and disadvantages so we should choose the possible one to go depend on the intenerary we want to come.

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  1. 1st body para is poorly developed.

    1. Organization : Introduction, Body, Conclusion have the essential parts of each writing genre. B-
    2. Development:
    - Coherence: logical order, pronouns, connecting (transitional) words, phrases, sentences B-
    - How specific and deep is each idea (examples, supporting ideas….)B-
    3. Language:
    - Grammar: (sentence structures) buses are aslo use every day C
    - Vocabulary : Almost the families C
    MARK: 6.2

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