Thứ Tư, 6 tháng 4, 2011

QUALITIES OF A GOOD GLOBAL CITIZEN.

Who are called global citizen? How meaningful of becoming global citizen? Global citizen is people who have warm heart to encourage, share and help other.That is very significant with unlucky destiny who are disabled, poor, sick, homeless. Because they need other people 'sharing and helping to help them break the wall of complex. Living and bringing happiness for other people is also for ourselves.So, it is very important to become a global citizen.Becoming a global citizen is based on the attitude of ourselves and our attitude with other. Everyone can become a global citizen if we are dynamic to open and connect,empathic with unlucky destiny and have a right awareness.

To become a  global citizen, the first important quality is we are dynamic to make goal in life.That means we are open, confident as well as having hoping,patience to make ourselves better.Vietnamese as well as Asian people are usually shy and lack of confidence in crowded. we are ourselves can not find power, so how we can give power for others who are unlucky and need a help.Therefore,we have to prove to the world that we are little Asian in appearance but not little in spirit.For example, professor Ngo Bao Chau- the  first Vietnamese was awarded Nobel price about mathematic. He is a shining example for us to follow. Try doing anything we think to know exactly our real ability is better than afraid to pull it out of our mind and never reach a goal in life. When we firmly stand,we can connect others to give others what we have such as hoping,patience or only a warm smile.Especially,the youth should dynamic more and more to become open, active and make connection with people around us and even in the world.We all want introduce our country, our culture,our people with the foreigner to make them know Vietnam- that is our country! All of that require us dynamic to improve ourselves.

Another important qualities to become a  global citizen is empathy. Having empathy  when we have warm heart to understand and share with other 's unfortunate things. Not everyone are lucky in life; beside healthy people,rich people, happy people,there are a lot of people who are handicap, poor, sick, homeless. We feel deep grief  to witness children  in Africa who suffer hungry,poor, illiterate, or even HIV/AIDS.We are astonished to know a lot of Japanese died of earthquake, tsunami disaster. In our country, every day we meet a lot of handicap people who try to sell lottery under the heat of sunlight. Every rainy season, there have a thousand people in our middle country lose their house, their family because of storm, flood. Moreover, when we are peaceful in our house at a cold night, there still have a lot of the homeless. How can they survive without  a shelter? How painful that unlucky people have to suffer.Therefore, we-lucky people should open our heart to share, help, empathize with unlucky destiny. That is humanitarian which everyone should have in life.Maybe some people think that they can not empathize with other 'pain because they do not have enough condition to help others.However,instead of doing great thing for other as we ever thought, we sometimes only have small action like helping the elderly pass the crowded street, giving up our seat to handicap people or giving a hard lottery seller an encourage warm smile. All of that we think rather simple,nevertheless have to origin from our heart with a real sympathy.

The last important quality is we have a right awareness.That means we ourselves  have to aware everything in  life that we should or should not do. Last week, i saw a man whose appearance showed that he was a rich, polite, awareness  person; in contract, he was not. He sat in state in his expensive new car and threw the Pepsi can, which he just drank on the street.Our environment is destroyed seriously because of some action like that. The earth is getting warmer, hypothermia is happening in a lot of area and cause disaster like storm,earthquake, flood,etc.Moreover, there are a lot of people die of poorness, hungry, sickness and war. May be they do not have to die if everyone help and share with their problem. They need our help to survive and overcome unlucky destiny. Having right awareness to realize that we can give hand to save other 's destiny. Maybe by we can send other money if  we are rich, if not we can send them food, clothes, books or even send them our warm smile. Our environment, our living as well as other 's living will be better if we ourselves have right awareness.

In short, to become a  global citizen we should be dynamic to open and connect, sympathy with other by all our warm  heart,beside have a right awareness to aware what we should do. I believe that with love start from our warm heart we can become a  global citizen to share and help other people.

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  1. People hardly to live individual in this society because we live together in a community which need connection, warm heart and sharing together.That is more significant with unlucky destiny who are disabled, poor, sick, homeless.Because they need our sharing and helping to help them break the wall of complex. Living and bringing happiness for other people is also for ourselves. irreasonal leading to the thesis------To do that, we have to become a good global citizen who are dynamic to open and ----
    d have a right awareness;therefore, to know what our responsibility is. --- What do you mean?

    To become a good global citizen, the first requirement is we are dynamic to open and connect with the others.Vietnamese as well as Asian people are usually shy and lack of confidence in crowded. we are ourselves can not find power, so how we can give power for others who are unlucky and need a help.Therefore,we have to prove to the world that we are little Asian in appearance but not little in spirit.For example, professor Ngo Bao Chau- the first Vietnamese was awarded Nobel price about mathematic. He is a shining example for us to follow. Try doing anything we think to know exactly our real ability is better than afraid to pull it out of our mind and never reach a goal in life. When we firmly stand,we can connect others to give others what we have such as hoping,patience or only a warm smile.Especially,the youth should dynamic more and more to become open, active and make connection with people around us and even in the world.We all want introduce our country, our culture,our people with the foreigner to make them know Vietnam- that is our country! All of that require us dynamic to do and together make a connection.
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    How can we become a good global citizen? Do not think that we have to do great things for other people to become a good citizen. In fact, the first step to become a good global citizen is we ourselves improve our awareness. We have to aware everything in our life that we should or should not do. Last week, i saw a man whose appearance showed that he was a rich, polite, awareness person; in contract, he was not. He sat in state in his expensive new car and threw the Pepsi can, which he just drank on the street.Our environment are destroyed seriously because of some action like that. The earth is getting warmer, hypothermia is happening in a lot of area and cause disaster like storm,earthquake, flood,etc.Moreover, there are a lot of people die of poorness, hungry, sickness and war. May be they do not have to die if everyone help and share with their problem. They need our help to survive and overcome unlucky destiny that the god send them. Having right awareness to realize that we can give hand to save other 's destiny. Maybe by send other money if you are rich, if not you can send them food, clothes, books or even send them your warm smile. Our environment, our living es well as other 's living will be better if we ourselves have right awareness.
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